Working Girls
Warning!!! Graphic language ahead. Those offended by such should not proceed.
Going solo
behind the dust jacket
fingers tapping
forbidden places
probing the g-spot
that turns
midlist hookers to
class act pick-ups
at the Big Apple pubs
Idealistic
visions pile up
bleed away
overdressed wet dreams
stripped down to naked desire
silken sentences
poetic frills
ripped away
as release approaches
Naked
on display
spread for your viewing pleasure
they come
in multiple
formats
hard covered
pulp pressed
digital ease
Fantasies
sized
flavored and fetished
to suit every taste
sex tension hookers
positions pimped
sales ranked
by best yank
fame and fortune bestowed
by glide of plastic through slit
Practiced practice yields
prose pros
putting out daily
pumping out reams
of smash words
bitcoin exchange for bits
of sex with soul
hoping for bigger
piece of pie
giving out quickies before they’re hot
property
grab one while the word fucks are free
They learn not to:
note cut of eyes
hear wag of tongues
feel critics fangs
crave taste of success
while growing craft
seeking to sink
to new levels
of naked
while they get so good
at being bad
~Nara
Happy first birthday, dVerse. Thanks for giving me a place to play with words.
14 Comments
Frank Watson
Urban erotic feel, like a pro. Great wordplay.
Denise Golinowski
From one Working Girl to another – Way fun! Wickedly creative! Granted I'm not in your league, but I'm doin' what I can.
Brian Miller
heck yeah….haha…love the blend of writing and well the much more erotic….you do leanr to get good at it…hone in on the spots that send shivers….delicious bits here…smiles.
joanna
niiice…
Daydreamertoo
Pheeeew Hot spots and G spots anddddd spots before the eyes, drops of sweat.
Cold shower here I come…lol
Fantabulous, erotic write
Positively sizzling!
Siobhan Muir
Awesome word play, and fine innuendo. Well done.
Arron Shilling
made me smile and full of wicked wordplay –
sex tension hookers… LOVE that line!!!
good times
manicddaily
Hi Nora – I love all the parts about prose pros – this wonderful sex writing novistry? novel industry? word/sex machine. Very interesting. k .
wcg1670
I like the naughty bits….
"prose pros
putting out daily
pumping out reams
of smash words"
there is certainly an association of release and perhaps even a post coital(uhhh, whatever term works for writing here..HA)solitariness ……clever as well as suggestive on several levels…off for a smoke now
Marbles in My Pocket
A good metaphorical write. Nice!
Shawn
A sexy use of words! I really enjoyed this. "prose pros" I loved this line.
Eric (Bubba) Alder
Entendre nous! Clever and tantalizing.
Susan Daniels
Loved the tension here, the heat of it.
Heaven
I like the passion and heat here..specially the last two stanzas ~