Broken Reason
When fantasies jackknife your to-do lists
and longing for the aural caress of a lover’s sigh
trumps need for solitude,
I’ll be your reason.
When you’re on your knees,
armor of business suit and spreadsheets shredded
by black satin sheets and scent of wild roses,
I’ll be your reason.
When your carefully mapped journey past temptation gets detoured
by a kiss-licked trail headed south to curl your toes,
making you forget all the reasons to say no,
I’ll be the reason that un-breaks your heart.
~Nara Malone
This is my contribution for Open Link Night at dVersePoets. Drop by this evening to join the fun or to read what others wrote.
21 Comments
Siobhan Muir
Very nice, Nara. 🙂
Brian Miller
well, my toes just curled a bit at the thought..ha….
if only our hearts were unbroken that easy you know…
made me smile though at the thought of having someone
there willing to be that…
Heaven
I like the refrain, I'll be your reason, smiles ~ I feel like heading south now to curl my toes, smiles ~
Good to see you Nara ~
Grace
Mary
That last line is a strong one. I think it would be a positive thing to be the one to unbreak someone's heart.
KB
Nice extended metaphor. >KB
Anthony Desmond
Can someone be the reason for me, please? ha… strong write; true love indeed
Glenn Buttkus
Love or lust, it matters not, for you are giver & fixer & friend & lover; thanks form this dollop of sensuality midst ISIS chaos, winter's ice embrace, partisonism, Kyle's killer, & Spock's death. Reminds me a tad of the Jack Nicholson comic Western GOIN' SOUTH.
Delaina
Very seductive!
grapeling
(whistles) 🙂 ~
Björn Rudberg
What sweet promises..I do love that curling of the toes.. The refrain is so effective to seduce.
zongrik
please, how do you not jackknife you to do list? I have to know!! :0
in state, faithful lying
Claudia
ah it's precious if there's someone to un-break the heart on those detours of life..
annell
I also like that you offer to be the reason.
annell
I don't like to have to 'hunt' for your poem….
Gabriella
Powerful lines, Nara. I like how the addition in the last line changes the meaning so subtly.
Nara Malone
Annel, you had to hunt? I posted a direct link at dVerse.
Nara Malone
Good question, zongrik. Mine is perpetually jackknifed.
Myrna R.
Very sexy. I like the refrain. To be the reason for someone's healing heart must be a good feeling.
mishunderstood
Seductive…but sweet. I love the last line! 🙂
hyperCRYPTICal
Just lovely lovely lovely.
Anna :o]
Rosemary Nissen-Wade
Surely an irresistible offer!